1st Rough cut & FEEDBACK

-Quite random (plot/scenes)
-Storyline?
-Confused weather we are doing the shots as reality or animation

After we all sent in the rough cut for our opening the class feedback on each of the videos.
The class said that it didn't make any sense therefore, its pretty confusing weather what the main character is or what is happening. There was no plot. It seems like there was no story line to it. Also, it wasn't clear if it is an animation or reality because we didn't really mix it and it is completely separated from each other.

RESPOND to feedback

-Eye scene first then titles
-Add more animation to the real footage (at least 1/4)
-Something to do with the flashback that makes her in the position she is
Start with normal footage and add animation little by little

So we decided instead of having the animated photoshop we would start with the close up of an eye first. So basically it will start looking normal and then as it progress throughout the opening there will be more animation to it. Either we do that or throughout the whole thing there will be a consistent amount of animation. Also, I decided to make a new storyboard which is more detailed and precise on what shots we need and at what angle. In different scene we'll make sure that it links together in some way so that it doesn't look like a different "story".